Fog / Mist
The physicist Richard Feynman once related a story about his father. How, his father said, to know the name of a bird isn’t impressive because it tells us nothing about the bird. Notice the bird: how it looks, how it behaves, what it does. Then, you’ll know something about it. As a poet, I’d add to notice how the object of one’s attention changes something about ourselves.
Fog / Mist
I still can’t tell the difference
between fog and mist –
which slicks from off the ground,
which visits from above.
I suppose I could look
it up on my phone,
but then I would have missed
black wings cutting through
this morning’s blur stained green
from farther trees
like a memory coming into focus
or a dream dissolving into day.


What a beautiful way to describe the fuzziness! We call it “aimai”
Usage like:
Don’t give me Aimai love, rather black wings to cut through.
This is lovely… the whole poem felt natural and right!